Monday, July 9, 2018
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Great art work Riley! I can tell you have put in so much effort to finish this to a high standard. Your writing is amazing and I love how you put some Maori in it to. What you could change next time is maybe having some paragraphs. But this is a great piece of work!!! Keep it up!!!!!!
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